The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the information about the survey of different age groups about the factors that make them happiest.
Overall, the survey speaks most of the people from both younger and older people feel happy when they achieved something at work while only a few do not feel happy about other factors.
Firstly, let us look at the similarities between the age groups. it is noticeable that the people from both younger and older people have the highest percentage of achievement at work with 31% and 32% respectively. doing hobbies is also the most important factor for both younger and older people and it stands second in making them happy with 22% and 24% respectively.
Secondly, moving on to differences they have a couple of sectors. For young people, the 18% of the people who say that they can find happiness in having a good appearance and 15% stating that traveling is the most important factor in their happiness. For older people, the people who feel happy when they are being with their families is 15%. Lastly,20% of the people who are above age 30 state financial security is the most important factor in their happiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...he similarities between the age groups. it is noticeable that the people from both...
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Suggestion: Doing
... at work with 31% and 32% respectively. doing hobbies is also the most important fact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85279187817 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51963865224 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527918781726 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3088249781 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.222222222 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0303527576208 0.215688989381 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0165865987569 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387764720743 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0344988996026 0.15604864568 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519710563797 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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