The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts provide information about the activities of graduates and postgraduates students of UK who left college in 2008 and did not join full-time job.
Overall, majority of both graduates and postgraduates went for further study while minority of them took part in voluntary works.
In the first chart, it is clearly seen that more than 2500 graduate students went for part time job while less than 350 of them participated in the voluntary works. The students were seen more likely to continue their further studies and 2725 number of students were accounted for that. The number of unemployed students were counted to be 1625.
The postgraduates were comparatively higher in number than the graduates, which can be noticed quite easily from the graphs. About 30000 of the postgraduates were continuing their further studies. The students doing part time jobs were 17735 which were more than the unemployed ones whose number was 16235. Very few, compared to the other data, only 3500 of them were interested in voluntary works.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...re than 2500 graduate students went for part time job while less than 350 of them partici...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed students were counted to be 1625. The postgraduates were comparatively higher...
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Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: higher
... The postgraduates were comparatively higher in number than the graduates, which can be notice...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...eir further studies. The students doing part time jobs were 17735 which were more than th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16470588235 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65074253487 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2034580592 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153747938923 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074439677782 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105282053396 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134060415361 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135351407932 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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