the charts show the number of people who were affected by four types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural area

Essay topics:

the charts show the number of people who were affected by four types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural area

The bar graphs demonstrate how many cities and rural people were impacted by four different categories of noise pollution: traffic, train, aircraft, and industry, between day and night in 2017.
Overall, it is clear that in both urban and rural areas, traffic was the main reason of noise pollution at all time and this problem was more serious in urban than rural areas.
In cities, daytime noise from traffic affected to 64 million people while this number was just 34 million in rural areas. The number of people affected by traffic at night was 48 million in cities and 24 million in rural areas. Noise pollution by train was less than traffic in both cities and rural areas, at 10 million and 8 million respectively during the daytime and 8 million and 6 million respectively at night.
The noise pollution caused by aircraft during the daytime impacted on 4 million people in urban areas and 2 million people in rural areas. At night, these numbers were 1 million for both urban and rural areas. While rural areas are not impacted by industry noise, in urban areas, 1 million people during the daytime and 0.25 million people at night were affected by industry noise pollution.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82843137255 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32625285084 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43137254902 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3170695465 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.125 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306088869632 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18850699718 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565133780662 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209765659993 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711024297211 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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