Leader and directors in an organization are normally older people. Some people think younger leaders would be better. Do you agree or disagree
In recent decades, It is true that there is a greater portion of leaders and directors in institutions are elders, and some people believe that the younger people could be a better one. Personally, I completely disagree with this point of view.
On the one hand, I accept that younger leaders have advantages in the modern world. First, the main positive that young people have is enthusiasm, which is more likely to affect the spirit of whole company employees, regardless of their peers or subordinates. As a result, since the employees could be motivated to work hard and reach their full potential for the big accomplishment, the organization could develop and increase more revenues. Second, it is clear that the younger leaders are easily embraced innovation approaches for the organization rather than older people. A good example could be applying high-end technology devices in business operations, such as data analyzing and logistics optimization. This could reduce enormous expenses in the long-term aspect.
On the other hand, many things are depending on ages that contribute to a great leader. In fact, most legendary leaders are required to have much experience-based knowledge such as decision making, the organization operating, and personal judgments on hiring people, which can only achieve if they endure throughout most of their adulthood to master. If the young people promoted on an executive role of the company, mistakes and wrong decisions could be made due to they are devoid of essential experience for the issues.
In addition, older adults are conducive to be better leaders or directors since they have developed a great net-working and gained respect as well as prestige in not only their field but also other areas, which also needs an amount of time to build.
In conclusion, although it is true that younger leaders have significant positives, I still believe that the elders would be greater leaders in an organization since they have the experience, large relationship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...aspect. On the other hand, many things are depending on ages that contribute to a great lead...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24148606811 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89790889265 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557275541796 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9187020035 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.230769231 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330724839654 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108733611682 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923159280718 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197175523339 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713261264884 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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