The chats below show the number of Japanese tourist travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
There are two different charts displayed the result obtained from a survey about amount of Japanese tourists who traveled abroad and percentage of them who chose Australia as their destination.
The provided first bar chart compares the number of Japanese tourist who traveled other countries from 1985 to 1995. It is immediately apparent that there was a gradual increase of Japanese tourist from 5 to 15 millions over a period of 10 years starting from 1985. Apart from this, In 1991, there was declining in number of Japanese tourist about half of millions.
According to the second diagram, first of all, it could be seen that Australia's share of Japan's tourist market had experienced a fluctuation in the 1988. From the 1985 to 1993, there was a sudden increase about 4 percent in the number of Japanese people who traveled to Australia. On the other hand, as it was mentioned before, during the 1988 to 1989, there was a drastic decrease of Japanese tourist in Australia. Also, it should be noted that in the 1993 to 1994, there was other declining in Japanese tourist.
As, it can be observed from the second chart, before 1985, Australia's share of Japan's tourist market was zero.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, apart from, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54190056119 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527093596059 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8598144292 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.444444444 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393793718749 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191709927439 0.103423049105 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445417211834 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250282447554 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535732072163 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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