The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology
collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce
reliable forecasts.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown
below
According to diagram, first of all it could be seen that Australian Buream of Meteorology were gathering precise information from diverse sources and after interrupting and analysis them, inform people about weather condition.
There are three stages for weather forecasting that the first stage is about collecting up the minute information. As it displays on the diagram, they use satellite, radar and drifting buoby.
Based on the picture, next stage is about preparing the broadcast through analysis the satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chat which were received from mentioned source. It is immediately apparent from diagram that all analysis have done by computer.
After producing reliable forecast, they inform people by media.Television and radio, both do it by news.
Apart from that, telephone can inform them by recorded announcement
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ian Buream of Meteorology were gathering precise information from diverse sources...
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Line 2, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are three stages for weather forecasting that the first stage is about collecting...
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by. Based on the picture, next stage is about preparing the broadcast through an...
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Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Television
...e forecast, they inform people by media.Television and radio, both do it by news. Apart f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 130.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60769230769 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85579448318 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.3327596069 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161101604551 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701618947101 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505072242816 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086852676775 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488735928196 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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