The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in
Britain from 1972 to 1983.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
The table below shows the development of buying consumer durables by families in Britian during 1972-1983. According to the table, first of all, it could be seen that eight articles were identified as a consumer durable.
As it can be observed percentage of households who own central heating had a gradual increase over a period of 11 years starting from 1972. Television is the next article that in respect to previous article had a slight increase from 93 percent to 98 percent.
There is no information about video until 1983 when 18 percent of households were owning it in Britian. Based on the table, percentage of buying refrigerator by households experienced a 21 percent increase between 1972 to 1983.
Apart from that, till 1982 there is 8 percent increase in consuming vacuum cleaner in domestication use. It is immediately apparent that buying using telephone in homes had a sudden increase during those years. However, there is no information for dish washers until 1978 when 3 percent of families in Britian use its. After 5 years,the percentage of owner increased to 5 percent.
Also, it should be noted that consuming washing machine in domestic use had a 14 percent increase during 1972 to 1983.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that eight articles were identified as a consumer durable. As it can be observe...
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Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...were identified as a consumer durable. As it can be observed percentage of househ...
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Suggestion:
...972. Television is the next article that in respect to previous article had a sli...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ntil 1983 when 18 percent of households were owning it in Britian. Based on the table, perc...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...milies in Britian use its. After 5 years,the percentage of owner increased to 5 perc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00492610837 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80270891587 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581280788177 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.3820789479 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3636363636 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166920529945 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073599523083 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082896492824 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105781322164 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602655196227 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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