There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need
music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the
International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is essential part of every country’s culture. Music have different types in the world that all of them have their own charm and fans. Some people think that traditional music is more important while others claims the opposite thing. In the following paragraphs, I elaborate the reasons of both.
A study done by researcher concluded that listening international music help individuals to be familiar to some properties and custom of other country. As music is a message of our feeling , custom, etc. It can bridge the gap between to different culture.
Most of elderly swear by traditional music since it reminisces them their memories and they did not used to international music, so they are disagree with it.
To wrap it up, I believe both of them are important and this comparison do not lead anywhere fruitful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... of every country's culture. Music have different types in the world that all o...
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Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ry. As music is a message of our feeling , custom, etc. It can bridge the gap betw...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...es them their memories and they did not used to international music, so they are dis...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...sed to international music, so they are disagree with it. To wrap it up, I believe bot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 138.0 315.596192385 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02173913043 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86542346305 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68115942029 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8704718295 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322740057553 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117488211731 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696755863729 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167428384296 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898788194896 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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