Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments
In today life, due to the increasing population particularly in this century, there is no evident of large houses in the big cities where people live in the tiny apartment instead. Despite the benefit of this which its supporters claim, there are clearly various concerns connected with it. Lack of happiness and existence of loneliness among habitant of this apartments have become intensely controversial in many countries. Merits and demerits of living in apartments, both together have their supporters, so in the subsequent paragraphs, I try to articulate both ideas and their reasons.
Recent studies reveal that people who live in high-rise apartments are more likely to get depressed and feel unhappy and lonely. They reasoned that long working hours in the megacities is key aspect of it. Also, it should be noted that depression got epidemic in this century and living in this kind of apartments would be escalate it only.
In spit of all disadvantageous which were mentioned above, living in apartment help people to be in touch with each other more easily and effectively. It avoids from many problems for people who could not afford houses, as apartments are more pocket friendly than houses. Based on the philosophy arena, it helps you to deals with problems better, that is partly because when you see from windows you can see everything in small scale and it give you strong feeling about ignoring tantrum in the life. The clear example for this, is athletes who climb the mountains when feel dump, they swear by this help them to tackle better with life and its challenges.
To narrow it down, in my viewpoint, creation of these feeling has nothing to do with this kind of apartments, on the contrary, living in them can help people to feel more happiness. Both of these feeling which are unsolved issues in this century, created because of existence of psychological problems among people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, kind of, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00940438871 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66096011234 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570532915361 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4261431574 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.923076923 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145616420776 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573200948719 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697057450685 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933989166455 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575553769195 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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