Prevention is better than cure."
Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to
spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Prevention is better than cure. It is more than just an opinion: decades of research demonstrate this outcome while some people claim the opposite. In the following paragraphs, I imply some reasons.
First and foremost, we must consider is about cure cost. From the beginning until now, people have cost of cure on their mind. Some of disease have expensive drugs which is just rich people can pat it. for instance, toothache in some serious case which were needed surgery were inflicted high cost on their owner. Also, it should be noted that it is more profitable for government and assurance company to educate prevention and help people on it. Added, it can help to eliminate dangerous illness’s outbreak. For instance, Denmark is a country which cared to prevention and learn people about caring their teeth which led to decreasing of remedy’s expenses in a good way.
Another reason to mention is about curing. Prevention given rise to healthier and happier life since individuals were not obliged to spend some of their times in hospital. They have more time to enjoy their life. On the other hand, some of diseases were not cured completely and person must spend time and money during his life. Apart from this, some illnesses have no cure and are lethal which is a very expensive cost for a government and family to lose a member.
To sum up, as it implied before prevention is more benefited strategy to government and I do believe that every government should educate people about prevention of disease and allocate suitable budget for it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 586, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...try which cared to prevention and learn people about caring their teeth which led to d...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the diseases') or simply say ''some diseases''.
Suggestion: some of the diseases; some diseases
...to enjoy their life. On the other hand, some of diseases were not cured completely and person mu...
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Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ucate people about prevention of disease and allocate suitable budget for it. ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and allocate suitable budget for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, apart from, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93939393939 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57423083094 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.421615653 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139810590132 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562092505167 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786014131173 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103144170006 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351987284689 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.