Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century The map below shows the development of the village

Essay topics:

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.

The map represents the overall development and increasing population of a small countryside village known as Chorleywood in England, near London.

Overall, It can be seen that how a small village with minimum population saw significant growth in its overall population. As the village started developing its infrastructure, building Main Road, Railways and Motorway with park and golf course in the center. In the beginning, Chorleywood was a small village close to London along the Main road from 1868 till 1883. After that, Railways came into existence in the year 1909, crossing the main road in the southeastern part. Due to railway people started moving near the Chorleywood station and its surrounding areas, from 1883 to 1922 the village has seen rapid growth in its population.

On the other hand, the British built a Motorway in the year 1970, crossing the railways in the south and the Main road in the north. Such developments brought more people into the village because of its convenience. Therefore, more and more people started moving in and started their life in the town along the Motorway near the Railway line in the south and beside the Main road in the north. These all developments took place from 1970 till 1944.

In the end, It can be concluded that Railways played an important role in the development of Chorleywood Park followed by Main Road and Motorway.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03463203463 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74125461516 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489177489177 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9769002716 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.727272727 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211895769616 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992289624938 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103373501242 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172524918984 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13194881933 0.0819641961636 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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