A close friend is coming to visit you. She has asked you for advice for things to do in your home town and the surrounding area.
Write a letter to your friend, in your letter:
Ask for more details about your friend's plan.
Suggest some places to visit and things to do in your home town.
Tell your friend about food or drink she should try during her stay.
Write atleast 150 words
Begin your letter with dear______
Dear Fatima,
Hope you and your family are doing well. Its been too long since we last met. I would love to welcome you in my home town, and will try my best to suggest you the best places to visit and some delicious food to try.
As you have mentioned in your letter that you will be coming in mid of next month, I would like to know your plan in detail. Do share your flight timings and the name of the hotel you have booked, so it will become easier for me to pick you up from the airport and drop to your destination. By doing this I will get a chance to spend some good time with my old mate.
Here I would like to state some beautiful places of my city you should visit. You must have heard about the shrine of our beloved leader Muhammad Ali Jinnah, its a pretty place with a significant history. You can go there in evening, because mornings and afternoons are very hot these days. Or you can also go to the beach of Karachi that is the most popular tourist spot. Nights are too soothing over there. As far as we talk about food, Karachi has enormous numbers of spots where they serve scrumptious food.
Some of them are Javed nihari, Meerut for b.b.q and student cafe for biryani. If you miss any of these you will regret later.
I would want to invite you at my home for a dinner, please do take out some time for us. Although I understand it's a short trip and it would be difficult for you to manage things, but me and my family would be very happy hosting you. Do tell me your complete plan in your next letter so that I could arrange transport facility for you to make your trip comfortable and joyful. Say my hello to your family.
Warm wishes,
Your friend Sana.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Fatima, Hope you and your family are doing well....
^^^
Line 6, column 159, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...our beloved leader Muhammad Ali Jinnah, its a pretty place with a significant histo...
^^^
Line 6, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt history. You can go there in evening, because mornings and afternoons are very...
^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...for b.b.q and student cafe for biryani. If you miss any of these you will regret l...
^^
Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...some time for us. Although I understand its a short trip and it would be difficult ...
^^^
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y hello to your family. Warm wishes, Your friend Sana.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 1.00243902439 1596% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 5.60731707317 1088% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 325.0 196.424390244 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20923076923 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02863290895 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 106.607317073 175% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575384615385 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5420889262 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1052631579 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21052631579 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 3.70975609756 377% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406892982751 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122828282486 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942184891056 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217354558971 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789633304113 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.2329268293 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 11.4140731707 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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