Digital Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answers and include examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write atleast 250 words.
Although many would argue that technology has create a gap between generations, I think it has filled many gaps in communication between masses. I somehow agree with the fact that it has taken over most of our hours, in spite of this aspect i totally support advancement.
If I talk about emails, it has become the most fastest and reliable source of communication in corporate world. It is time saving and at the same time it does not require any efforts but power and internet connection. On the other hand in early ages this work was done by letter writing and later by sending fax. In contrast with email both the processes required much more time and energy. Sending letter needs manpower, writing efforts, and a proper post-office system. As far as for email, we only need a laptop or a cell phone with internet connection.
Instant messaging and social media has helped many people around the globe to talk to each other in a more efficient way. I believe it has lessen the distance between families living far away from home. I have seen many people finding their lost friends and family social media such as Facebook and instagram. Messaging is another easiest way to connect with respective person to inquire about something or to send information about yourself.
Before the technology era people have faced many difficulties in conveying some important news to the other person who lived far away from the native country or city. I have an example of my own family. My father used to live abroad due to his job. When my grandfather died, my father wasn't there with his family, there was no affective communication system exist back in early 80's. My mother send him a letter which reached to him almost half a month later, and due to that he missed the significant moment of his father's funeral which he regret till the date.
In the end i would like to state that technology has helped us in many ways, it contributes in making people more social and confident. It helps us saving time and energy that we can use in somewhere else. Our generation have become more productive in corporate and business sector, it helped in developing economy. Students are benefited through the use of computers and internet. For me its a positive change in the world by spreading technology all over.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...communication between masses. I somehow agree with the fact that it has taken over most of our hours, in...
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Message: Use only 'fastest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
... I talk about emails, it has become the most fastest and reliable source of communication in...
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...er writing and later by sending fax. In contrast with email both the processes required ...
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Suggestion: to save; save
... more social and confident. It helps us saving time and energy that we can use in some...
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as for, i think, in contrast, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7506234414 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5490651665 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573566084788 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0642505161 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5909090909 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2272727273 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126876255767 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033391849694 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330764727698 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711219543731 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428364788338 0.056905535591 75% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.