Describe an activity you like doing you should say what activity it is who you like doing it with and explain why you enjoy doing it
In this fact-paced lifestyle , it is almost impossible to take a rest let alone some free time . But one activity which i like to do whenever i have sometime to spare it to read books . I enjoy reading book , a genre in self-help books . i think we can read book everyday because it make yourself have creative and good for you .
I have three friends who i always read a book with me .one of them is my high school friend .we both get along very well from when we first met until now . we are both very busy with work or learn in high school bit we always try to make for each other.
this is my favorite free time activity because it's a simple, practice and not an expensive activity to do . read books very interesting .it make me fun and i can know i this world , example: traditional , food , people..... i love it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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In this fact-paced lifestyle , it is almost impossible to take a rest ...
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... to take a rest let alone some free time . But one activity which i like to do whe...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...some free time . But one activity which i like to do whenever i have sometime to ...
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... have sometime to spare it to read books . I enjoy reading book , a genre in self-...
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Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... it to read books . I enjoy reading book , a genre in self-help books . i think we...
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...eading book , a genre in self-help books . i think we can read book everyday becau...
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Suggestion: I
...ing book , a genre in self-help books . i think we can read book everyday because...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing book , a genre in self-help books . i think we can read book everyday because...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...f-help books . i think we can read book everyday because it make yourself have creative ...
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Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...nk we can read book everyday because it make yourself have creative and good for you...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... yourself have creative and good for you . I have three friends who i always read...
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...friends who i always read a book with me .one of them is my high school friend .we...
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Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...me .one of them is my high school friend .we both get along very well from when we...
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...ry well from when we first met until now . we are both very busy with work or lear...
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Suggestion: We
...well from when we first met until now . we are both very busy with work or learn i...
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Suggestion: This
... we always try to make for each other. this is my favorite free time activity becau...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... my favorite free time activity because its a simple, practice and not an expensive...
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...tice and not an expensive activity to do . read books very interesting .it make me...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Read
...e and not an expensive activity to do . read books very interesting .it make me fun ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...vity to do . read books very interesting .it make me fun and i can know i this wor...
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...to do . read books very interesting .it make me fun and i can know i this world , ex...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ks very interesting .it make me fun and i can know i this world , example: tradit...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... make me fun and i can know i this world , example: traditional , food , people......
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...know i this world , example: traditional , food , people..... i love it.
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...this world , example: traditional , food , people..... i love it.
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ample: traditional , food , people..... i love it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 656.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20512820513 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3323641547 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647435897436 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2244831373 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8888888889 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 1.69756097561 1532% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14893522179 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608545056312 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746296010327 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954192783095 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504808950031 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 11.4140731707 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.69 8.06136585366 71% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 40.7170731707 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.