The diagram below illustrates how sugar is made from raw sugar cane. Write a report for a university lecturer that describes this process.
The diagram gives information about the process of manufacturing sugar from raw sugar cane.
Overall, the process consists of 11 steps and 3 stages. Starting when sugar cane is delivered from cane fields in mash bins, and ended with loading the dry sugar to the sugar hoppers load truck, in order to store it in the warehouse.
Initially, in the first stage, after canes delivered from the cane fields in the mash bins, they are weighed and emptied onto a cane roller. Then, it is entered to a shredded cane and yields juice which is crushed out into containers. At the second stage, juice is examined for sugar content and heated up and limed in order to decrease its PH level to lower acidity. Subsequently, juice is entered into the clarifier where mud is separated from sugar and settled to the bottom. The mud is then removed through an opening located at the bottom of the clarifier.At the end of the second stage, the juice is sent to a steamer that consists of five chambers. In the steamer, evaporation of water transformed the juice to syrup.
At the final stage, the syrup transferred to a vacuum pan, which it is cylinder in shape with a triangular end, there the syrup is transformed to sugar crystals. Next, the sugar is spun to clear it from molasses, which are used as stock feed and for ethanol production. Finally, wet raw sugar is transferred into cooler where it is cooled and dried and then loaded to the trucks in order to deliver the produce to the warehouse.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
... located at the bottom of the clarifier.At the end of the second stage, the juice ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65151515152 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51286862442 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5354974113 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268241604194 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108054932572 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104825914091 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223032074096 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10640871177 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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