The diagram below show how geothermal energy is used ti produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides information about the process of electricity which is generated by geothermal power.
Overall, it can be seen that the production of electricity from geothermal energy is a multistep, linear process, by which consists of 5 stages, pumping the cold water down, geothermal zone, pumping the hot water up, move of turbine by steam, production of electricity with generator by turbines.
Initially, cold water is pumped down to the injection well which is 4.5 km under the surface. Next, the water goes through the geothermal zone which is full of hot rocks to increase the temperature of the water. In the third stage, the hot water arrives to the production well to be pumped up to the surface again and the stages which are under the surface finishes.
In the second half of the process, the hot water goes into condenser and causes to create steam. After that, the turbine takes the power from the steam to move itself before providing enery to generator. Finally, generator converts the kynethic energy to electricity and the last stage ends with generating the electricity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: creating
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, second, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0218579235 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68156280213 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535519125683 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1303215579 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.875 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0868257111214 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446952793022 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574339449658 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078480874631 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596923706771 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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