Write about the following topic.
It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural
environment, such as the South Pole.
What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In modern times, the issue of making far trips has become highly controversial. There are those who say that opportunities to far travel for research or holiday are incredibly beneficial for our mental health and improving our knowledge, however others believe that these are not. In this essay, I will examine the benefits and downsides of this issue and provide my overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, there is a number of disadvantages of far travel. One of the most obvious of these is air pollution. A good illustration of this is that people make far trips such as from a continent to other continent for a research or just a touristic purpose in modern time. As a result of this, smoke which comes out from plane engine or car exhaust leads to global warming which can make sea level higher. Another disadvantage is disease spread. Unlike in the past, people today travel more. They can bring different types of disease from a country which they went to. For example, coronavirus, a virus caused pandemy all over the world, has spread like this way.
Despite these arguments, there are also various advantages to improving opportunities to far travel. Perhaps, the main advantage of the issue is that making researches more easily. Unlike in the past, scientists today travel over hundreds of kilometres to make research and expand their scientific knowledge, which leads to new inventions. Far trips are more cheap and easy, in addition they are able to share their scientific findings with their collegues. Another advantage of the issue that people make new friends easily. They can use their mobile phone and make a profile on internet such as date sites to meet new people which are even far away thousands of kilometres. Maybe, people will meet their new friends face-to-face on South Pole.
In conclusion, it must be said that there are various advantages and disadvantages of development of travel to remote natural environment possibility for scientists and tourists. In my opinion, all things considered, advantages outweigh disadvantages. If this development become beneficial for scientists, perhaps, they can find cure for coronavirus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13276836158 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83376702721 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519774011299 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0475933076 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5238095238 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20451891551 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620023841225 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073401132872 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148110094429 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981130241504 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.