Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free
entry.
Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
In modern times, the issue of entry cost has become highly controversial. There are those who say that museums and art galleries should take entry cost from their visitors, however others say they should not. In this essat I will examine the benefits and downsides of this issue and provide my overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, there are two key advantages of taking entry cost. Perhaps, the main advantage of this is that collected money from visitors can used for improving museums’ and art galleries’ buildings. If this money could not be taken, museums or art galleries would not have financial resource to improve theirselves. Secondly, some of money which is collected from visitors can given to ministry of treasury to open new museums or art galleries. Unlike in the past, population of society increased enormously and they need new and more museums or art galleries to visit.
Despite these arguments, there are also various disadvantages to taking entry cost. One of the most obvious of these is that researches and students come up with an obstacle to complete their research or homework. As a result, they have to pay entry cost to complete their research. If entry costs are too high to entry, some people, especially students, can not afford them and they will not be able to complete their research easily. Furthermore, if people can not visit art galleries or museums for free, they tend to make other activities such as running, walking, and cycling. Thus, they do not expand their intellectual knowledge and this casuses ignorence.
In conclusion, it must be said that taking entry cost has clear advantages and disadvantages. Having considered both sides of the issue, i believe quite strongly that the disadvantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages. Ignorance is the worst amongst other consequences so if governments want to create a modern society, they have to implement a policy that gives permission to entry every museums and art galleries for free.
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11818181818 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79614880104 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542424242424 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8387287974 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3529411765 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258191526113 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084229947864 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621712533379 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163471998056 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769832706771 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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