Write about the following topic :
Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
In these days, the issue of national goals has become highly controversial. There are those who say that the most important goal for a country is economic progress, however others believe that all types of progress have equal importance for a country. In this essay I will examine the both sides of these views and provide my overall opinion.
There is a wide range of ideas that economic progress has the most importance for a country. Perhaps, the main argument of this is that countries can not achieve other goals without economic resource. For example, a country which has many goals such as education, militarian, science etc. needs economic resource for its all goals. If it wants to improve education facilities, then it has to take appropriate steps such as building universities, providing education materials, funding etc. Many governments agree with this idea and they implement unique policies for their economy rather than other goals. Another argument, from a political point of view, countries which have weak economy can not be independent. A good illustration of this is that Syria must take economic aid from Russia and Islamic Republic of Iran, because Syria has not power to handle its economy and addicted to these two countries.
On the other hand, there are two main ideas of that all types of progress have equal seriousness for a country. The key reason of this trend is that education improvements rebuild country's system of economy. If genious and hard-working students graduate and start to work for their country, this will lead to improvement of serious national economic change. Other argument of this view is that money can not buy happiness. A good illustration of this is that people from Brazil are happier than people from the USA. The USA is the richest nation in the world but some problems make their people sad, such as traffic problems, crime rate etc. As a result, American people are not the happiest in the world whereas their country is the richest.
In conclusion, it must be said that there are many strong arguments of both sides and this issue has become an essential part of contries' policies. Having considered both sides of the issue, in my opinion I strongly believe that economic progress is the most important goal of a country. If a country which has strong economic conditions has problems with any issue, it can solve it quickly but countries with weak economy are not be able to solve most of issues without good economic conditions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...but countries with weak economy are not be able to solve most of issues without go...
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Line 4, column 448, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the issues') or simply say ''most issues''.
Suggestion: most of the issues; most issues
...h weak economy are not be able to solve most of issues without good economic conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, whereas, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93111638955 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59548770756 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467933491686 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1587821913 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0476190476 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309861481804 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988406145977 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863901506998 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219316155064 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849174477391 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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