People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with
both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age.
Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in
modern day society.
Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
These days more and more teenagers use drugs which are legal or illegal. The causes of this phenomenon are varied and have led to a wide range of effects on young people and society. This essay will outline the reasons why teenagers use legal or illegal drugs, and discuss the results it can have on them or the society. In addition, I will offer some measures to tackle this issue.
From an overall perspective, there are two main reasons why teenagers use legal or illegal drugs. The primary cause of drug use is young people’s environment such as their family, friends and neighbours. If one young person grow up in a bad environment such as streets which are full of criminals, he or she will make bad types of friends. This will be cause that he or she will be able to meet legal or illegal drugs in his or her early life. Another reason is movies which are filmed about narcotics and cartels. This type of movies have scenes which include illegal drug use. After watching them, young people can be curious about how to use drugs.
The results of drug use in early ages are numerous and potentially serious. Perhaps, the most serious consequence is using narcotics which are much addictable and mortal such as cocaine, synthetic hard drugs and bonsai etc. Unfortunately, using this types of materials lead to death. Another consequence is psychological problems such as depression or anxiety. There is a direct link between drug use and anxiety. The result of drug use is that brain functions change, which in leads to anxiety.
In conclusion, drug use has become a complex issue in our modern society with no easy solutions. In my opininon, the best solution of this issue is that governments must implement special policies about drug use. I think young people like feeling excitement about being placed in illegal situations. If soft drugs could be free, young people would use it properly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: BE_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79331306991 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50740166859 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525835866261 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9222446359 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.0952380952 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47619047619 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255264927869 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831947488468 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505694227303 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158378419661 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270609081158 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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