You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In modern times, the issue of environmental problems has become highly controversial. There are those who say that the most important environmental problem is under-threat species, however, others believe that there are more environmental problems which have more importance. In this essay, I will examine the both sides of this issue and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why people believe that the under-threat species are the most important environmental problem. Perhaps, the main reason of this idea is that the loss of animal or plant species have led to deforestation. A good illustration of this is that, people from South Africa were face-to-face with scarcity in 1955 and people are still nervous about it. Secondly, loss of species of animals and plants cause to lose other species. Thus, there will be no animal or plant in our world in the future. Unfortunately, human is included in the animal category.
Despite these arguments, there is also a case for the idea that there are more important environmental problems. The strongest argument of this view is that global warming has the most importance. Global warming caused to a wide range of effects on the world and its consequences are potentially serious. The result of global warming is that sea level rise, which in turn leads to a loss of land. Furthermore, the level of air pollution has been rising. This can be led to various effects on human life such as sickness, lung cancer, other types of cancer.
In concusion, it must be said that environmental problems have become a complex issue with no easy solutions. Having considered both sides of the views, I believe quite strongly that there are more important environmental problems such as global warming or air pollution. If we can not protect our world, there will be no appropriate place to live for new generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'losing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: losing
... of species of animals and plants cause to lose other species. Thus, there will be no a...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eads to a loss of land. Furthermore, the level of air pollution has been rising. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06389776358 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88756036804 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514376996805 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3418274282 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0555555556 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311331195728 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883738440161 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693024523214 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183471580734 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886302037625 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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