You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
In modern times, the issue of having children in mature ages has become highly controversial. There are those who say that people should have children in their mature ages, however others believe that they should be parents in their early ages. In this essay, I will examine the both sides of this argument and provide my overall opinion. Additionally, I will provide an explanation that why more people having children in their mature ages than in the past.
There are many factors which are reasons of having children in mature ages such as global world’s life conditions. Perhaps one of the most important reasons of this is that economic and cultural conditions have completely changed. For example, a person can not be married until his or her 30s because nowadays university education with doctoral degree has become compulsory for finding jobs easily. This education finishes nearly those ages. If someone do not complete doctoral education, probably he or she will be unemployed in global world. In our environment, Turkey, level of unemployment is increased significantly and people want to have children after improving their chance of finding jobs.
From an overall perspective, there are two key advantages of having children in older ages. Perhaps the main advantage of this trend is being in a family with good economic profile. If parents have children in their older ages, they have much money to spend on their children’s demands such as education, holiday etc. The other advantage of this trend is being a parent as more experienced person.
Despite these arguments, there are also various disadvantages of this trend. One of the most important of these is communication problems. If difference of age between parents and children is too much, parents will not be able to share their ideas such as about daily experiences with their children. As a result, they will not be connected close. Another disadvantage of this trend is that parents can be impatient with their children’s behaviour and they can easily get angry. A good illustration of this is my family, my father which is 45 years older than me can easily be anxious with my behaviour which leads to lack of good feelings.
In conclusion, it must be said that having children in older ages has clear advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, all things considered, it is evident that the disadvantages outweigh advantages. If people have children in early ages such as 27 or 28, they will be more happy and they will have a lovely family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 453, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... finishes nearly those ages. If someone do not complete doctoral education, probab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01425178147 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75351729083 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486935866983 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.116710621 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7826086957 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3043478261 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73913043478 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265739749353 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866622289743 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048328819428 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169689722651 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401747029426 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.