Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In modern times, the issue of job types has become highly controverisal. There are those who say that making your own work is the best, however, others belive that it is not. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons why people believe that being self-employed is better than working for an organisation and outline the downsides of being self-employed.
Generally speaking, there are two main reason why people believe that making your own work is the best. Perhaps, the most obvious cause of this idea is because employers provide tiny salaries for employees. This can lead to make people desparate about their economic conditions, thus, they feel strong enough to start their own work. A good illustration of this is Nusret who is a chef from Turkey. When he was a young chef, he was gaining tiny salaries but he has to look after for his siblings. He has taken all risks and open a luxury restaurant named “Nusr-et”. Other main reason of this idea is work conditions. After Industrial Revolution, companies and employers have started to make demand for working long hours. Furthermore, employees have very heavy workload and under too much pressure now. The result of bad work conditions is that employees are unhappy about their jobs, which in turn leads to starting their own jobs instead of working in an organisation.
However, there are a plethora of disadvantages of being self-employed. Firstly, there is a high risk. For example, if people start to run their own business, they can be face-to-face with business world’s problems such as economic crysis or devoluation. After these problems, disappointment will be unevitable for weak businesses. Secondly, nowadays, the amount of expenditure for even a little shop is colossal. Not every people can afford this, so, people who want to run their own business can totally lost their all money. This is because, their economic profiles are generally low when they want to start their own work.
In conclusion, it must be said that being self-employed has become a complex issue with no easy solutions and also, it has clear disadvantages. In my opinion, the best solution to tackle all problems associated with job is that policy makers have to make good policies and politic authorities have to pass new laws. If appropriate policies had been implemented by governments, everything would have been different in terms of job conditions today.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84728105007 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.634098576 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5652173913 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.347826087 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295800778075 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857658424602 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118623631541 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201029533642 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929153527318 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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