Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and
large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most controversial issues is that are people able to change the World and have they enough power to make it better. There are those who say one person is not be able to change the environment by himself or herself and these type of changes can made by only governments or colossal companies, however others believe that they have capability and motivation to do it. In this essay, i will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, there are several reasons why people belive that only governments and big companies are able to change the environment. From a practical point of view, the primary argument supporting this idea is that governments and big companies are stronger than one person. If they want to change the environment, they will easily make it with their employees or staff. From a economic point of view, another key argument is that they are able to make the environment better and better because they have much Money for it.
On the other hand, there are also strong arguments for the thought that people can change the World individually. Perhaps the strongest idea of this viewpoint is that governments and big companies consist of individuals, as a result of that if there is not any person in there, then they have nothing to do anything about any issue. Another argument is that just one person has enough motivation to change the environment. A good illustration of this is that Steve Jobs, the founder of Apple, had started to work by himself in a garage. After his great work, he invent the first mobile phone which is worked by touching the screen. Eventually he has changed the environment, now almost everybody use iPhones in their Daily life. Additionally, events like this are incredibly rare.
In conclusion, it must be said that this topic is so complex with no easy answers. In my opinion, all things considered, i quite strongly agree that only governments and big companies can change the environment and make it better and better. Only they can make it as long as they remain strong and they have much Money for it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ere are those who say one person is not be able to change the environment by himse...
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Line 1, column 393, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and motivation to do it. In this essay, i will examine both sides of the argument...
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Line 2, column 383, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... it with their employees or staff. From a economic point of view, another key arg...
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Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'invents'.
Suggestion: invents
...f in a garage. After his great work, he invent the first mobile phone which is worked ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, then, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77322404372 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61582736023 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486338797814 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0356836385 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.764705882 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157091168232 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510380872875 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543129291898 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10982161352 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294891421365 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.