The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison when relevant
The given diagram explains the lifespan of salmon, which is a species of large fish.
Overall, there are totally 4 different stages in a salmon's life, starting with eggs and continuing until they reach adult size.
At the beginning of the life cycle, adult salmon lay a massive number of eggs in the upper river where the water flow is slow. These eggs are hidden under reeds and small stones for 5 to 8 months. The eggs then hatch into baby salmon and are identified as 'fry'. They measure 3 to 8 centimetres in length. For approximately the next 4 years, these baby fish live in lower and faster-moving water of the river.
When the salmons reach 12 to 15 centimetres long, they turn into a new stage called 'smolt'. At this time, they beginning to migrant to the open sea where they spend about 5 years living. During this time, smolts grow quickly in size with it size ranging from 70 to 75 centimetres. These smolts are then termed 'adult salmon'. Finally, the adults swim upstream to reach the upper river where they reproduce a new generation and the life cycle start again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'salmons'' or 'salmon's'?
Suggestion: salmons'; salmon's
...ere are totally 4 different stages in a salmons life, starting with eggs and continuing...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... baby salmon and are identified as fry. The fry measure 3 to 8 centimetres in lengt...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56923076923 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34109163835 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610256410256 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7213625489 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.25 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137496544081 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534405588925 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063148977473 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108282691932 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742783555675 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.