Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams , like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about which type of sports they choose to engage in, some think that team sports bring them more benefits and some prefer individual sports. This essay will discuss both. However, I am personally an advocate of the former group.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why people think that participating in individual sports brings them more advantages. First, solo sports give them chances to develop independence. It can be explained that when they play an individual sport like swimming or tennis, they are forced to overcome all stress and obstacles themselves during the game because there is no one to help them during the game. Second, playing individual sports makes it easier to maintain a regular training schedule. Playing a solo sport, they can set a schedule in their free time and don’t have to rely on other one, while in a team, they have to wait until all members have time to practice together.
On the other hand, I would say that it is more beneficial to take part in sports played in teams than solo sports. The main reason is that playing in a team will help people to improve their interpersonal skills like teamwork, communication or leadership, which are necessary skills nowaday. Take football as an instance. They have to cooperate with their teammates throughout the game efficiently to win. This will teach them to get on well with others and adapt to the team environment. Moreover, improving communication skills through team sports will encourage people to make more friends and build up their social network, which is much beneficial for their careers.
In conclusion, which is more advantageous between team sport and solo sport depends on participants’ point of view, and in my opinion, engaging in sports played in teams brings more benefits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0198019802 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6524717776 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4412094788 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405425905288 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128530647422 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879684679916 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24630967841 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01981231143 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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