The two diagrams explain the process of making cement and concerted, including stages and equipments to be used for building. Cement is made mainly on materials of limestones and clays through about five stages, while the concrete is mainly produced in the equipment of concerted mixer.
At the first stage of cement production, limestones and clays are put into a crusher and made into powder. Secondly, the powder and some extra clays are mixed in a mixer. After that, the mixture flows into a rotating heater while being healed at the bottom. Cement is then produced after using the last tool of grinder. Once all steps above are completed, cement can be stored in bags.
The second diagram illustrates production of concrete. The procedure is simple however there is strict demand on the percentages of materials, which are cement at 15%, sand at 25%,small stones at 50% and water at 10%. A big concrete mixer is used to mix them all to produce concrete.
Overall, procedures must be strictly followed in making cement and proportions must be calculated precisely in producing concrete.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, secondly, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01098901099 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61642328623 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.857442356 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9090909091 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318717953856 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124208058456 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118446870258 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197475290729 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111511648614 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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