The diagram below shows geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Summarise

The diagram indicates the method for the production of electrical energy utilizing geothermal energy.

Overall, water pumped through geothermal zone transforms into hot water producing steam which is further used for the production of electricity. The detailed steps involving the very process are explained below.

Firstly, the cold water stored in the tank is pumped down to injection well which is 4.5 km from the ground. Secondly, water from injection well is allowed to pass through geothermal zone containing hot rocks. Flowing water through hot rocks aids in increasing the temperature of water which will then reaches the production well.

Consequently, hot water from well is pumped up to the condenser. The steam generated from the hot water is then allowed to power turbines by rotating the turbines continuously. Finally, Kinetic energy produced from the rotating turbines is converted into electrical energy by generator which is then transferred to the electric poles.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52631578947 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78810790795 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519736842105 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1793094292 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152522776482 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679432746725 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741038153114 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119918522557 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076933168994 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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