The diagram below shows how the Australian bureau of meteorology collects up-to the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how the Australian bureau of meteorology collects up-to the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

A glance at the provided reveals the information about Australian Bureau of Meterology that How they collect Data of every minut on weather for produce forecasts.
There are three things to collect the Data from three different places which are satellite, radar and drifting buoy. Satellite os give weather information from the sky. It send a picture for analysis and forecasting. After that, this information are going to computer for make broadcast and it upload for television, radio as well as recorded announcement. While, radar and driftiong buoy are analysis information from radar screen as well as synoptic chart and this Data are going for broadcast. This data uploading in different things for broadcasting which are TV newsreader, radio and recorded announcement.
Overall, it is interesting to note that the Australian Bureau of Meterology is use three things to collect imformation per minute on weather of different places for forecasting.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sends'?
Suggestion: sends
...ve weather information from the sky. It send a picture for analysis and forecasting....
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Line 2, column 294, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uploads'?
Suggestion: uploads
...g to computer for make broadcast and it upload for television, radio as well as record...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sting to note that the Australian Bureau of Meterology is use three things to col...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97576134049 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6759163308 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.875 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185045375489 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908544397139 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11302231458 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193653130222 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121685016091 0.0819641961636 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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