The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology
collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce
reliable forecasts.
The illustration gives information about the collection precise information on weather up until the last minute by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology to provide reliable weather forecast.
Overall, the information is collected by multiple sources such as satellite, radar, and drifting buoy, which then is analysed by a computer and finally broadcasted to the people through the medium of TV, radio, or recorded announcement.
The first souce of information from the satellite is received as a photograph of an area. This photograph is analyzed based on the cloud movements and patterns to forecast. Radars are the second source of information. A radar screen shows the movement of clouds which is further analyzed. The last source is the drifting buoy which sends a synoptic chart of the sea/ocean. All the information is combined and a forecast is made.
The above forecast needs to be delivered to the people of the nation. This is majorly done via three mediums. Television newsreader reads the this prediction and delivers it to the public. Next, is the radio. Finally the third medium is via a recorded announcement sent on telephones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...ee mediums. Television newsreader reads the this prediction and delivers it to the publi...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...s it to the public. Next, is the radio. Finally the third medium is via a recorded anno...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...corded announcement sent on telephones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, then, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24324324324 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98265744507 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578378378378 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.7050242395 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6153846154 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2358679074 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649625033502 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122498640223 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159107495256 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181094808427 0.0819641961636 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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