Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Advertisement has always been of great importance for any product or service to be out there in the world well-knwon among people. This increases the sales and in turn the revenue of the company. Some people believe that we, as humans are successfully persuaded to buy things with the help of advertising. Others argue the commonness of it to the extent that people tend to ignore it. In my opinion, reaching the masses through the use of advertising is very effective.
Advertising a product in the right way is a well-known strategy to create a feeling of needing it in the consumers' mind. In today's world, there exists a lot of advertisements about a huge array of products on platforms such as social media, Television, etc. which clearly caters to the fact that it is successfull in its agenda. For example, I never felt the need to buy action figurines as it did not appeal to me in toy stores, but when I saw multiple ads on the internet I was brain-washed and wanted to buy one as soon as possible. This demonstrates the impact it can have on human minds. Another renowned example of the impact of advertisement is Amazon in India. Some weren't aware of Amazon, some weren't feeling safe about ordering due to various reasons as returning the product due to some defect, bad quality, etc. but, with captivating and re-assuring ads, Amazon had millions of users onboard with buying products online.
However, some people do not agree and think that these are soo embedded in our daily lives, we tend to ignore them. While this statement is true, it might applicable to those advertisments which are not appealing enough to the end user or when the person is really busy with some urgent work. If the ad is not creative such as those created by start-ups or medium sized organisations, people do not actually pay attention to it. I am not fully on-board with this idea as the human brain is processing this information received subconciously and it does make some impact. Sometimes, such subconcious processing comes out at a later point to buy the same product unknowingly.
To recapitulate, while the perusasion powers of advertisement are immense which makes advertising a successfull feat, some do not agree to this notion and believe that people are habitual to the ads and do not pay attention to them. However, unknowingly these are making huge impact on people and making them want to buy the products
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, really, so, well, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7966507177 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81081746296 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538277511962 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3216008102 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254919203722 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073558008377 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642857462254 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172005361164 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575239002848 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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