Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
Entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians, or sports stars are paired handsomely is what some people feel. I completely agree with the statement and I feel there should be some regulation on it, giving higher pay to other professions who actually deserve it.
The various entertainers mentioned above no doubt have put in a lot of hard work just like all the other people. It is also true that people feel happy after listening to some music, watching some film or sports which takes the stress away for a while. However, their pay is absolutely ridiculous ranging from anywhere between a few lakhs to a few crores. Firstly, a very small number of people use that kind of money to do some social good instead of spending it all on extremely luxurious houses, cars, private planes, etc. The money is, in a way getting wasted for nothing. Secondly, the entertainers do not actually need such a huge amount of money to survive. Even they don't know how to spend their money whereas people are struggling to survive due to the death of money. This pay should be regulated and given to other deserving professions.
There are quite a lot of professions that are underpaid regardless of everything they do. These include soldiers, teachers, laborers, etc. While soldiers put their lives at risk to protect the country, teachers play a crucial role in educating the youth of the country which would ultimately enable them to stand at their own feet and work towards a better tomorrow, both these professions aren't appreciated enough in terms of the salary they receive. The laborers do all the manual hard work such as building houses, shopping complexes, cleaning the sewage, etc. which is essentially done for other people and not for themselves. In the recent pandemic, many teachers had to face financial crisis as their pay, which is already low was further cut down.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate by saying that there are plenty of professions who deserve a highly paid job as compared to entertainers due to the reasons stated above. If there would have been a regulatory body, there would not have been such a drastic difference in the pay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8409703504 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60282471424 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582210242588 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8140247405 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7777777778 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296661029396 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811592501585 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768146646059 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172569882558 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960618582265 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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