In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
why might this be the case?
do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?
A home is a place where a person finds peace and has a feel of belonging. After a very tiresome day at work anyone would want to go their own place and shed off the weary feeling. This home can either be a rented place or bought from the hard earned money. Owning a home is considered to be very important as opposed to renting in some nations.
The reason why people in some countries would give more importance to buying their own home rather than renting could be many. In my opinion, I feel one reason could be the sense of ownership and power. Humans love to have ownership of anything from a small toy as a child to having their own cars when they grow up. For example, when I was a kid I loved the fact that I have my own cricket bat. Owning that bat gave me a sense of power, in a way that I could say that the bat is "mine". Later on when I started working and earning money on my own, I bought a PlayStation. Although I could have rented it whenever I wanted to play but still I chose to buy it.
Moving on to assessing whether it is a positive or negative situation, I would say it completely depends upon the financial status and the feasibility of renting a house or buying one. For example, buying a house in a big city like Mumbai will not make sense if you don't have adequate finances or plan to settle down there. Instead living in a rented place will be logical and financially a better option. So in a place where buying a house is given more importance, this could have a negative impact due to the social pressure. On the other hand, this could have a positive impact as buying a house ensures that the person would have a roof over his head and a place to sleep in at any point of time. Unlike living in a rented place, there is no threat of being kicked out my the landlord.
To wrap up, there is no fixed answer to whether the situation will have a positive or a negative impact. I believe that the importance should given more on which option is feasible in a country rather than just leading on with the prior notion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, for example, i feel, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22278481013 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38103116434 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498734177215 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7879051548 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7894736842 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7894736842 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297056914332 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921647650794 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832561525171 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174533679745 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341458624142 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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