The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

The picture represents the process by which the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers necessary updates on weather situations to provide reliable announcements. Overall, there are four main sequences on how weather news is delivered.

Firstly, weather information are picked up by various weather instruments. One example is the weather satellite that can take a snap chat of weather conditions seen from outer space. Another example, the radar also intercepts these data and then feeds the information to either a radar screen or synoptic chart. Similarly, drifting buoys collect data from the ocean and feeds it to synoptic charts.

Secondly, the process of analyzing and predicting weather patterns are done with the aid of forecasting mediums, such as the satellite photo, radar screen images and viable trends on the synoptic charts. Thirdly, with all these data analysed in a computer, the Bureau of Meteorology then ready its forecast about the weather. Finally, media outlets broadcast the news via TV, radio, and radio announcements.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, third, thirdly, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49382716049 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81530210207 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9576506068 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8888888889 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 5.23603664747 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209731397968 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085798677648 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678351863023 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143436038211 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058070944952 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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