The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented process flow diagram describes the manufacturing procedures and preparation of coffee to be sold in superstores and retail shops as well.
Overall, it requires to follow eleven stages of the process to make the coffee to be sold in the shops. The whole process commences with the picking up of the beans and ends with the coffee packs or jars in the hands of customers.
To begin with, the farmer has to pick each and every coffee bean from their respective crop fields. These collected beans are then sprinkled over large and open farmland to be dried up in the sunlight. Following this, after the drying process, the beans are then roasted in an oven over the flames. These hot beans are then cooled at a much higher rate. Then, they pass through a grinder to be converted into a powdered form.
In the subsequent stage, this powder is mixed with water. Furthermore, the impurities are then sifted out of this mixture by a strainer. Followed by freezing down this pure mixture. Then again, it is headed towards the grinder, following that, this grinded powder is now dried by vacuum in a confined space. Finally, the coffee powder is ready to be poured into jars through a hopper. In the end, a sticker is labelled on the jar for the branding of its producing company.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'following'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: following
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, so, then, well, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70044052863 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46366204935 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859030837 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1001087031 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2142857143 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0735565865334 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268844472591 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387833561957 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607807343409 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432313459401 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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