The Diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The Diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram demonstrates the how electricity is generated from water through hydroelectric power station.

Overall , there has been illustrated three to four phases goes on to get electricity from water. And the power station has 24 hour operation, which can be seperated by day and night.

First of all, river flows in to high level reservoir, which is been blocked by dam and it opens only during day to flow the water to generator. And it is closed during night. On the reverse water that has been used goes back to reservoir in night.

Furthermore, the generator has reversible turbine, which pressures water to produce force. In the result of thath generator produces power line, that will be transferred to national grid afterwards. On the bottom part of power station the water that has been used pumped into high level reservoir.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02112676056 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67202422022 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9332991978 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2222222222 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142086574174 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670371044777 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901123199805 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121908832463 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113507399758 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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