Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.

In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Nowadays learning foreign language is considered top priority. Although, there is a lot of debate going on between groups of people whether learning first English or local. With saying that learning local language first is vital for someones career, i think every one should learn English afterward.

Fistly, the world is becoming more and more globalized. And in the result of that every sector and company is demanding well-educated people, which English accounts for main part. Moreover, it is evident that English is needed almost in every part of our own lives. For instance, when we travel around the world the only globall accepted language is English, which will remain to be. Ultimately, in order to show success in our career we must acknowledge it as a valuable asset

There is no doubt that local language is the cornerstone of country culture and heritage. But these importances at the edge of extinction. Although, i think there are several ways of preventing it. First, there is need to be more cultural events empowering usage of the local language, such as spelling consets etc. Furthermore individuals need to be more infored about their own heritage, so they can get more are aware of containing it secure.

Overall, while English is a necessity for personal development. While learning local language and preserving it is a key responsibility for someone as a citizen

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, i think, no doubt, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12663755459 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77108559097 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615720524017 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.753767213 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8571428571 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303481894973 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100559400427 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712614722806 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174380368353 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06584862776 0.056905535591 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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