The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
The diagram depicts the process of electricity generation that takes place in the hydroelectric station. Overall, the whole procedure consists of separate stages and involves the usage of a variety of machinery that intake water to generate electricity.
As it could be seen, the water from the river is stored in the high-level reservoir until it is supplied to the power station. The power station is separated from the water storage with the dam that is open during the day time, when water flow generate electricity, and this dam is kept closed at nights, when the water is pumped up back to the storage. Once the water is supplied to the power station, it goes through the reversible turbines performing two different processes. During the day these turbines operate generator. And at night these machines do not work as generator operators but pumps water back into the high-level reservoir.
The electricity generation process consists of two different actions. The first action is the supply of the electric power from the generator to the power lines and then further to the national grid. At the end of this scheme, the electric power is consumed by a variety of institutions as well as residents. The second action performed by the turbines is daily water transmission to the low-level reservoir and reversed flow maintenance through the pumping during the night period.
Looking from the overall perspective, the process is sophisticated and allows to satisfy the demand of citizens, businesses, and governmental bodies for electricity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'satisfying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: satisfying
...the process is sophisticated and allows to satisfy the demand of citizens, businesses, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19123505976 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85480338771 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505976095618 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.158670879 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.583333333 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240345848706 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103742809305 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105428003174 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146139457771 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968812697569 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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