the diagram below shows how electricity is produced in a geothermal power plant.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where possible
The given diagram illustrates the electricity production using geothermal energy in a geothermal power plant.
Overall, geothermal energy makes use of the hot rocks which is located 4.5km underground. A geothermal power plant harnesses the electricity by using the steam arising from the hot water to rotate the turbines.
Two large bore holes more than 4.5 kilometres are made into ground, one for the injection well where cold water is pumped down which passes through the hot rocks in geothermal zone. The cold water ater heats up while passing through this zone and the hot water is pumped up into the prodution well which eventually reaches the condenser.
The condenser now holds the hot water, steam arising from the hot water powers the turbine. The turbine is coupled with the generator , with the rotation of the turbines, electricity is produced in the generator, then it is either stored or transported to other power stations or homes for usage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... from the hot water powers the turbine. The turbine is coupled with the generator ,...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he turbine is coupled with the generator , with the rotation of the turbines, elec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12025316456 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60378877643 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7949318283 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154425372823 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898886677523 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776670538432 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125578409343 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823473280399 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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