some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. they say the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
to what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
In Governments prespective appropriate waste management and recycling will keep the surrounding neat and clean.However, most people believe rubbish from homes are not recycled enough and argue that higher recycling rates can only be achcieved with government involvement, by implementing new regulations. I believe strict laws are the only possible means to make people adhere to waste recycling, the following paragraph intends to discuss reasons supporting this statement.
Households in developed nations like United states and Australia, wastes more than one third of its food and groceries, and even follow poor grabage disposal policy. Factors favoring this situaion is catergorized two ways, on the one hand people practices like improper labelling of the garbage, disposing recyclable wastes in non recyclable dustbins as well as they lack exposure on the possible benefits of recycling. On the other hand, most manufactures don’t follow strict protocol on labeling the recyclable tendancy in their products.
Similarly, many countries allow the companies to wrap their product in plastic sheets, those wraps are seldom recyclable. This not only creates havoc in recycling but also posses devious threats to all ecosystems. In recent times, birds, land animals and marine creatures are affected by this kinds of garbage.
Governments are solely responsible to make strict laws that might reduce this trend. In order to save the environment and protect the habitat of millions of living beings, government create laws that penalize citizens for improper garbage disposal, and even stricter regulations on the companies that disobey these laws. Apart from these the government should invest in technologies that provide better recycling.
To conclude, I completely favor government has the sole responsibility and capacity to implement laws that compel people and firms to follow good practices on recycling. However people should support the governments by learning more about waste disposal and recycling, as combined efforts provide better results.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ill keep the surrounding neat and clean.However, most people believe rubbish from homes...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ls and marine creatures are affected by this kinds of garbage. Governments are s...
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Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... to follow good practices on recycling. However people should support the governments b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, similarly, so, third, well, apart from, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72727272727 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85330320511 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62012987013 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5857990795 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.692307692 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329486107924 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102163014078 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748426459074 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166331867208 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928534029758 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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