in the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want in online without paying to what extent do you agree or disagree to that statement

Essay topics:

in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want in online without paying.

to what extent do you agree or disagree to that statement?

When humans learnt to produce paper, the medium of sharing the information transformed drastically. Although, printed newspapers and books still have a huge audience, this trend is meant to change in the future. As smartphones and other medium of data sharing is on the rise, people began to read everything with no cost, thus in future, sales of printed materials will reach a negligible amount. This essay aims to address the foreseen scenario with valuable examples and points.

On the one hand, Printed newspapers and books have been around since a very long time. While in the past, newspapers and books were the only source where people can gain knowledge about the daily or weekly happenings around the world. In addition, story lovers got their dose of excitement in the printed form of story books and novels, as well as most educational institutions remain oldschool, where books are used for teaching their students.

On the other hand, more and more researchers are constantly working on improving our day to day activities. A good illustration of this can be seen in our smartphones, which has applications of online journals of all leading news agencies, that are available 24/7 to deliver news around the world. Similarly people can gain access to other printed books through applicaiton such as Amazon Kindle, Readable, these applications constantly update their archieves to keep their customers up to date. These are few examples of how its going to be in future, huge contributor for this revolution is the attitude of the people to accept and adapt to changes.

To summarise, I completely agree, that science and technology led to wonders of advancements in all fields of life. As change has become inevitable, printed materials are indifferent, and people also started accepting these changes Thus, in future, there is a high possibility that most of us will forget, the look, feel and smell of a printed newspapers or books.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...n to read everything with no cost, thus in future, sales of printed materials will reach ...
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Line 1, column 482, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ario with valuable examples and points. On the one hand, Printed newspapers and ...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... 24/7 to deliver news around the world. Similarly people can gain access to other printed...
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Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... to date. These are few examples of how its going to be in future, huge contributor...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...o started accepting these changes Thus, in future, there is a high possibility that most ...
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Line 7, column 345, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'newspaper'?
Suggestion: newspaper
..., the look, feel and smell of a printed newspapers or books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, similarly, so, still, thus, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09345794393 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76999423856 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563862928349 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0484165122 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.769230769 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134690006514 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439665921829 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378787470924 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801726232268 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202521962107 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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