in the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. the only people travelling inside will be the passengers.
do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Automobile industry has a huge share in the development of a countries economy, whereas in the future, vehicles such as cars, buses and trucks will function similar to auto-pilot mechanism seen in aeroplanes and it won’t require a driver for its successful operation. It is believed that these driverless vehicles will only have passengers. There are pros and cons in any new development, however, I believe advantages of driverless vehicles are far more than the disadvantages. This essay intends to highlight the possible advantages and few demerits of this situation with examples.
On the one hand, automobile companies already began investing billions of dollar to develop a technology that incorporates artificial intelligence that aid in self-driving transportation which will enhance the driving experience. There are a plethora of benefits for this situation, the most significant will be the decrease in accidents caused by human errors. Even though cities has highways for smooth and swift transportation, more and more accidents are being reported in daily basis. Secondly, people will have a peaceful travel experience, as they won’t be worrying about the license or the hectic traffic during peak times. Thus, the introduction of AI powered driving system will have an overall positive outcome for its passengers.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks for this situation, just like human errors, there can be some glitch in the automobile’s operating system once in a while, which may disrupt the journey and even can cause traffic accidents. Similarly, vehicles with such advanced technology will come at higher price which can only be afforded by rich people, while the access to such experience won’t be possible for people in lower economic status.
To conclude, It is beleived that by 2050 more than half of the automobiles will have some form of AI incorporated driving assistance. From my point of view, just like any new innovation, this will also have few setbacks during its introduction, although it does not surpass its much better advantages. As this industry is constantly evolving, there will always be room for further development.introducing cars.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...room for further development.introducing cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, whereas, while, in addition, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34948979592 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07377423313 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573979591837 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9203884442 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0625 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237099355035 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837108121442 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644667204474 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133195447985 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402147861278 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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