the diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity
The diagram illustrates how electricity produced by geothermal energy. It can be clearly seen from the diagram that there are five general steps in the process that they are quite complicated and the required material is water and a special rocks.
According to the diagram, cold water in a big tank need to pumped down 4,5 kilometres respectively to the underground injection well in oder to heat by the geothermal zone which have hot rocks.Moreover, this area connect the in put and the out put of the system. Next, water after reach to the high temperature come to the production well and pumped up to another big tank namely condenser. As result steam release by hot water make a turbine spin around. Finally, the generator produce electricity before they are translated to the energy tower.
In summary, the electricity produced by geothermal energy need to heat the water by the hot rocks and use the steam come from the high temperature water to make the turbine move in circle then the generator powered by turbine produced electricity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mped down 4,5 kilometres respectively to the underground injection well in oder t...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...he geothermal zone which have hot rocks.Moreover, this area connect the in put and the o...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...p to another big tank namely condenser. As result steam release by hot water make ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, moreover, then, well, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93785310734 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7810501329 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54802259887 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.3028338201 43.030603864 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259889622903 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141930931438 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156187058826 0.0843802449381 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193045769105 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590134382753 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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