The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below illustrates the proportion of Australian male and female in some types of age groups who often work out in 2010. It can be clearly seen that women are often participate the exercise than men.
According to the chart, the highest proportion of men who did the exercise is approximately 53 percent in the 15-24 age group, this figure is much more 6 percent as women at the same age. In addition, the lowest percentage of men belong to 35-44 age group with 39.5 percent far 12 percent less than women in the same age group.
By contrast, 35 to 44 ,45 to 54 and 55-64 had the largest percentage of female who did the work out (just over 52 percent) in comparison those figure much more as same age male . Finally, old women at 65 and over group did less exercise than younger group (just above 47,1 percent) and had the equal proportion with old men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.425 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34126066154 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.512517355 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250370691564 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139161135973 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550292485962 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186324442407 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340637576378 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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