Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.
Discuss both views and five your opinion.
people have different views about whether or not public as much information as we can in scientific investigation business and academic knowledge. this essay will discuss both these view however I believe it is not necessary to share some valuable information.
On the one hand, sharing as much knowledge as possible have some benefits. Firstly, people all over the world can access the result of many research or the experience of famous businessman. As a result, it will be easier for every one who want to improve or learning some thing new or try to find some useful skills for their future. Moreover, public almost major knowledge or important documents will promote the development of human. if we give every one a chance to gain their information which they want to understand it is mean they may figure out some thing better.
On the other hand, there are several reason for not public valuable information. An arguments for this views is many people have to spend time, money and hard working for a research so it is easy to sympathy why they don’t want to share some information. they need to use that information to bring their money back and earn more and more and of course, they deserve it. Furthermore, public research may lead to the disadvantages if their competitor use their result to against them. Meanwhile, some knowledge just gain the merit for some people, not every one is interested in it. Thus, it is not necessary to share everything we have, if a person want a academic paper or some research result, they have to ask for permission or pay money to have. Finally, it can be clearly seen that, information like business or major knowledge and scientific research should be a secret and share them or not is depend on the owner.
In conclusion, I believe that public every information is a good ideal but it is not obligatory, people should try to find their own or pay money or at least ask for permission if they want to have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, at least, in conclusion, of course, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72674418605 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66836397557 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470930232558 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6684734745 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296030465362 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106839658498 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678795306372 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205616885084 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806280446055 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.