As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individuals well-being.What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers

Essay topics:

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individuals well-being.
What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

Nowadays, people spend almost time to work, as a result, reasons affect to job satisfaction and how realistic is the expectation of this problem are hot issues to debate. The essay will discuss those question.

Firstly, there are many factors contribute to job satisfaction. The most improtance thing is passion. In fact, some adults are seemd to be enjoy their Monday morning than others because they feel excited when they go to the office with a brain full of energy. they love what they do and have motivation to build their career due to their passion to their job. In addition, skill improvement can make people satisfied with their job. A worker upgrade the job ability and become master in a major by training when they work so they feel like become a part of a team and get the respect from everyone in society. Finally, when people engaged with everything they do, they will get job satisfaction. A repetitive or boring job can drive a person to crazy, if they can focus and busy with their job, it seem like to be they are producing value and creative to make their life and the social better.

Beside that, some people are not comfortable with their job. Poor work environment affect to the satisfaction job. some company can provide the minimum benefit to their employee like the tools, guarantee or the time have to work. In some case, worker are not satisfied about their salary. Low income is reason make people quit their job or get stress so it is possible for them to get the job satisfaction.

In conclusion, passion, skill improvement and engaged are affect to the attitude of employee while work environment and salary are realistic expectation for all workers. In my front of view, the more benefit worker get, the harder they work.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74918566775 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49638089642 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517915309446 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.512285631 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7647058824 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347911763462 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121269193532 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800283929159 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210569154855 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607640972248 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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