Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are still required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In order to raise society health, some people argued that it is necessary to rise the sport facility number while the others think it is not enough and we need some effectively solutions. This essay will discuss both these view but I convinced that human need more than sports facility to make us become healthier.
The first argument for increasing number of sports facilities is people can approach some services in order to become fit and strong like gym center. This way can encourage people to participate and enjoy the advantages of sports instead of use mobile phone or watch TV after a hardworking day. In addition, the more facility of sport we have, the more we do exercise and install some public sport equipment in the park in one in thousand solution to overcome the time and money problem in play sports. A person who don’t have enough time to train at the gym or can’t afford an expensive sport machine can use the free equipment in the park.
By contrast, increasing the number of sports facilities can’t improve public health if we don’t deal some serious problems in our life style and our diet. The first and the most important reason is the inactive life style. Nowadays, people prefer to stay indoors and entertain by the internet or something like that. As a result, we are become weak and lazy. it is important to force people to understand the benefit of the sports and the negative of inactive life style. Last but not lead, the diet of human today have so much fat and provide too much calories. To overcome this issue, in my front of view government should tax heavily on fast food, Tabaco, wine and beer to reduce the disadvantage of them to residents.
To sum up, rising the sports facility number can improve human health, moreover, others solution are required to make people give up a lazy life and have a healthy life style.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74772036474 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4514803706 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534954407295 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5936466215 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.571428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253775586114 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803440455406 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626605628274 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165640196652 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286469921603 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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