It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option?
What sort of punishment should parents?
punishment can make young children realize the difference between right and the wrong or not is a hot topic for debate. However, many people believed that it is unnecessary to punish a child if he or she makes some mistakes, I convinced that we need to help them learn the true path by punishment.
The reason for punish children when they are at an early age is they will never forget and may avoid the same fault later. A suitable punishment like hit to their hand or force them to give up their favorite video games if children seem like spend more time to play games than doing homework will affect to the attitude of children. As a result, they will understand that they need to pay attention to study and forget the video games.
Another strong argument is a young child sometimes can’t compare the advantages and the disadvantages of some attractive activities like watching cartoon while having dinner or read too much comics instead of some useful books so that they waste their time easily. In my front of view, it is impossible to talk to them and show them the negative at this age because children may don’t understand and ignore what we said. Due to that problems, punishment is important to make they realize the right and the wrong.
In addition, some effective punishments which parents and teachers should use to make children have better attitude like do not allow them to use mobile phone or internet if they addicted to games or online videos. Moreover, we can set the rule and force them to allowed, if they break the rule, we need to punish them in order to make sure that they will never do that again.
In conclusion, i strongly recommend that children need to be punished if they make mistake because it is the excellent solution to help children have a good behavior. Furthermore, parents and teacher have to find the most suitable punishment for their childs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71856287425 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48213524501 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532934131737 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6916475565 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266573058845 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108192833227 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607846634406 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15247339301 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033222538933 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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