Essay topics: Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
some people believe that music is an excellent solution of help people close together even they are not the same ages or have their own traditional cultures. personally, I am convinced that this opinion is true but it depends on some facts which affect to people behavior.
On the one hand, music is a good way of bringing people from different situation together. The most noticeable reason is people may become more open to each other if they share the same type of music. For instance, some listeners is tend to be friendly to another when they discover that they both keen on folk music although they are not the same age while students in an international university share the same hobbies in guitar will make friend to enjoy their passions together. In addition, music is a good way to communicate with a stranger. In order to start a conversation with person who you meet in the first time and don’t know anything about him or her, the most effective measurement is to talk about their favorite music because everyone have their own music that they love so much, as a result, you will get close to them easily.
On the other hand, despite of those above arguments, there are several reasons why in some ways, music is not the best way to help people get closer. first of all, the different in favorite music may not help people make friend with each other. Take folk music as an example, elderly people may enjoy folk music but it will be confused for a young adult to keen on folk music and talk to people who is old about this kind of music. Furthermore, language barrier in music may lead to some problems in communication between each other. people from different nations may find abroad music is very funny and difficult to understand. Thus, in some ways, may be music is not enough for residents from different countries get together.
In conclusion, music is a fantastic solution to bring people of different cultures and ages together and help them be nice, kind and friendly. However, in some situation, it depend on the types of music and the hobbies of each person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67027027027 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4580096707 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472972972973 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1828020321 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.2 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340931160607 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143367421427 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684935476242 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22987463617 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010763811884 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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