The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK ,divided into three categories,from 1995 to 2002
The chart illustrates total time of telephone communicate in the uk divided into three types namely local-fixed line, national and international-fixed line and mobiles between 1995 and 2002. It can be clearly seen from the chart that mobiles and national and international – fixed line become more and more common in uk.
during this period of time, local – fixed line are the most popular type in uk. The number of minutes local call stood at just over of 70 billion minutes, this figure was two time higher than national and international call then hit a peak of 90 billion minutes in 1999 before dropping steadily to 70 again in 2002.
By contrast, the mobile call minute number increased slightly from 1995 to 1999 before surging dramatically to approximately 40 billion minutes in 2002. In addition, the minutes communicate by national and international – fixed line had a steady rise during this period of time and compare to mobiles calls, the mobile minutes calls was always far behind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
...e become more and more common in uk. during this period of time, local – fixed line...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e and more common in uk. during this period of time, local – fixed line are the most popula...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ixed line had a steady rise during this period of time and compare to mobiles calls, the mobil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99404761905 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78015700261 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559523809524 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7042075835 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.833333333 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310053338523 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157009262719 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949330823387 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206557664062 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276925248468 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.